Missed Weekend Writing Warriors, but I didn't miss Snippet Sunday!
So I feel like it's time that I tell you what this story is called. So far, it's incomplete, but if you continue to comment, perhaps I will become inspired to write more.
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Title: Pheonix: The Time Keeper
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WARNING: Before you continue on, you must know that this section is rated R for vulgar language. You have been forewarned.
Today:
I turned back to my lost love, my marble tinted beauty. She was changed, a piece of art in every
sense of the word. I leaned down and
turned over her left palm, fearing the worst.
I didn’t want to see that familiar clock shaped brand: the mark of the Time
Keeper. Who gave him the right to choose when it was time for someone to die?
I knew then that
I had to find this son of a bitch. I had
to end the battle between right and wrong, the battle between being a god and
being a man. He fucked with the wrong
lady, my lady.
I love his determination in this week's snippet! Keep writing! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks. This is something I actually wrote back in November or December. I haven't had the time to work on any writing in a little bit. Today I get to spend the next 4 or 5 hours typing up notes for my astronomy test.
ReplyDeleteFelt his rage with each word. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteI was very intrigued by this snippet. I want to know more. I'll be looking forward to additional posts on this one...so I guess that means you need to keep working on it. LOL
ReplyDeleteAs long as I have good feedback I will try to keep adding onto it.
DeleteThis is so good, Oto! "and I reached for a pulse that I knew I wouldn’t find" and the "marble tinted beauty". Great visuals. Good intro into the MC. I like it. Yep, what Jessica said, "Keep writing!" :-)
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